Comments on: Is there a Wocket in your Pocket?

By: Jane

Jane — Fri, 20 Jun 2008 15:09:20 +0000

How creative – I love it!

By: Andrea

Andrea — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 18:26:14 +0000

I once wrote a poem in the style of Dr. Seuss titled “Oh, The Things People Shove in the Places They Shouldn’t” inspired by an actual patient at a hospital I worked at. The poem, with the alternate title of “I Swear Doc, I Just Fell on It”, circulated the hospital (not my doing) with a copy of the x-ray clearly showing the, uh, problem. My poem had a totally different vibe than yours. I have rare moments of writers inspiration (sparked by the strangest things), but you seem to have yours going all the time. Thank you for your blog!

By: Tara

Tara — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 17:42:07 +0000

This second version is much better! Very “circle of life.” Hmmm, have I seen that somewhere before? Jane, I continued to be wowed by your literary prowess.

By: tracey

tracey — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:44:59 +0000

Dr. Seuss wasn’t given enough credit. It is HARD to rhyme. It is even harder to rhyme and have it flow, and make sense. (though, not ALL of his did… He sure did make up a lot of words!)

Yours sounded just fine.

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By: Lady Lyn

Lady Lyn — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:41:21 +0000

I really like the image of the kite flown away. I feel like that’s what’s happened in my life…

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By: Michelle at Scribbit

Michelle at Scribbit — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 04:59:57 +0000

So is Dick transparent too? I’m just teasing, one comment and I won’t let you forge it huh? Actually I’m rather thrilled to be a human shrinky dink Whatever that means.

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